Join for FREE | Take the Tour Lost Password?
Shop deviantART for the
holidays and save BIG!
Click here! :holly:
[x]

deviantART

 
©2008-2009 ~RaineHinata
:iconrainehinata:

Artist's Comments

This was made as a MooF (basically a secret santa for art) gift for LadyGlamSlam of GaiaOnline.

Lineart ©RaineHinata
Coloring © thecatsred
Character ©LadyGlamSlam

Comments


love 0 0 joy 0 0 wow 0 0 mad 0 0 sad 0 0 fear 0 0 neutral 0 0
:icontavisharts:
Very nice. I adore the pattern on the shirt. It’s wonderfully detailed and the shading is great.

For C&C.
I love everything but the shoulders. The only reason I don’t like the shoulders is because they go against the position of the breasts. Right now we have a lovely 3/4ths view of the breasts but a perfect profile of the shoulders. So it sort of seems that the two of them aren’t related to each other. What I would suggest would be to show a little of the left shoulder instead of hiding it. Doing so will move the shoulders out of profile and have them match the chest a bit better. I understand that you were trying to show that the shoulders were pulled back but sometimes extremes can work against you.

--
~hombre-blanco <- ^^ my boyfriend who is also a great artist.

[link] <- People I stalk and should be visited. ^o^
:iconrainehinata:
hmmm... you're right. The perspective is slightly off because of the missing shoulder. Thanks for the advice! <3

--
"To why Dorothy and Toto went, Over the Rainbow, to Blow off Auntie Em"

Details

June 23, 2008
39.4 KB
39.4 KB
524×799

Statistics

2
1 [who?]
25 (0 today)
0 (0 today)

Share

Link
Embed
Thumb

Site Map